Wednesday, 10 November 2010

Business Writing: How to write like a pro? -- Part 0


Found something interesting from the Google News under Hong Kong headlines. It was interesting because it was just a resume, but it went to the headline. It partially goes:

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I’m a very experienced investment banker and I really want a managerial job: REVIEW MY RESUME

10 November 2010
“I am a seasoned banker in treasury and FX, and I used to be the top dealer at a major US Bank. I have been in a management role (mainly treasury) for more than 10 years. I’m now looking for a managerial role in a medium to small-sized bank because I know that, given my age, it won’t be easy for me to find work at a major firm. I am especially interested in banks (perhaps PRC banks) which want to open new offices in Hong Kong or Singapore. I am good at running branches and global markets teams.”

Can he achieve his aims? Review his CV and leave your comments below.
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As a brief description of a resume, it looks fine to me. As the introduction of his cover letter? No way.

Luckily, he put a summary right below this paragraph:

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SUMMARY
Goal and result-oriented seasoned banker with good experience and knowledge in treasury, capital, FX markets and banking operation. Good at leadership, team building, portfolio management, strategic planning and interpersonal skills.

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Question for you guys, which one sounds better?

I guess you will agree with me that the summary sounded more professional, but why exactly is it more professional?

Before you give me your answers as the homework, let's look at another example.

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Version 1:
Yesterday in Hung Hom at the international Mail Centre, a parcel caught on fire. There were cell phone batteries in the parcel. 510 people were cleared from the scene as some people feared that it was a terrorist attack.
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Version 2:
A parcel containing cell phone batteries burst into flames at the International Mail Centre in Hung Hom, sparking fears of a terrorist attack and forcing the evacuation of 510 people yesterday. 
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The Version 2 was from the Standard.

Homework:
Which version do you think is more professional? And why? Think about it. Give you answers on Friday.

Resources:
http://news.efinancialcareers.hk/newsandviews_item/newsItemId-29370
http://www.thestandard.com.hk/news_detail.asp?we_cat=11&art_id=104736&sid=30222594&con_type=3&d_str=20101109&fc=2

Tuesday, 9 November 2010

Movie: Ghostbusters

Let's start with a song of sweet and exciting remembrances:



For better and more trailers, please visit: http://www.imdb.com/video/screenplay/vi984219929/

Yeah! Before Tropic Thunder, who you gonna call? Ghostbuster, of course! I watched until the VHS tape was all scratched when I was a little boy in London!
Image from gordtep.com


And my favourite ghost, sorry, not Slimer, but the Mr. Stay Puft Mashmallow Man!!!

Slimer
Image from Nerdage


What was Stay Puft really?

Quoting from Wikipedia, " According to Sam Delaney of The Guardian, "Stay Puft's familiar mascot combined elements of real life brand ambassadors the Pillsbury Dough Boy and Bibendum (aka the Michelin tyre man)"

Pillsbury Doughboy
Image from Wikipedia

Michelin tyre man
Image from Wikipedia

Is that all? Not just yet! It is also "the world's first caffeinated marshmallows"!!


I can't remember Ghostbusters II that well, but I will be looking forward to Ghostbuster III (2012), which is reported to be in the process of scriptwriting, so Ghostbusters fans, we may just be lucky enough to see it in 3D one day! Or even 4D!!!
Image from fusedfilm.com

By the way, have you played the Ghostbusters game on PS3 or Xbox yet?


Vocabulary:
remembrance -- (n) formal [C usually plural] a memory of something that happened in the past
mascot -- (n)[C]  a person, animal or object which is believed to bring good luck, or which represents an organization
caffeinated -- (adj) with caffeine added

Resources:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iCHFVTQKqdQ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cyRqR56aCKc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d-sALU_hveA&feature=related

Ghostbusters @ IMDB
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0087332/
Ghostbusters III @ IMDB
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1289401/

Slimer @ Youtube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eMF1Id2ePQA

Stay Puft Marshmallow Man @ Wikipedia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stay_Puft_Marshmallow_Man

Stay Puft Marshmallows
http://www.staypuftmarshmallows.com/

Ghostbusters 3 Update with Casting, Director and Story News
http://www.fusedfilm.com/2009/05/ghostbusters-3-update-with-casting-director-and-story-news/

Ghostbusters @ PS3 and Xbox article
http://www.infoaddict.com/tag/ghostbusters

http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/remembrance
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/mascot

Friday, 5 November 2010

Technology: My First Micro Four Third Camera -- Olympus PEN E-PL1

Oops, so I haven't talked about the camera I eventually bought and I've just realised that! You think I bought the Canon S90 like I said before? Then you are wrong. I didn't. Which one did I get? Well, this one, the Olympus PEN E-PL1 Micro Four Third camera!!

My very own Olympus
How good is this camera? Let's see what Kai has to say.


Words and expressions you should be able to hear from the video:

  1. Guinness World Record 
  2. highest population density
  3. it's like sardine in a tin (simile)
  4. art filters
  5. stealthy
  6. grannies
  7. succession of shoots
  8. a tad slow
  9. like a beautiful who likes picking her nose
  10. compact dimension
  11. pop-up flash
  12. street photography
  13. paedophile
  14. terrorist
  15. shuttle sound is next to silent
  16. DSLR
  17. handy HD movie mode
  18. magnifying
Test yourself to see how many words these words you can hear! Shouldn't be that difficult.

I got it in Broadway store for less than $5000 and I love it! Everything is good about this camera, especially the image quality, it is definitely something I have been long waited for. But the only problem it has is I can't use auto mode in dark dark night, and maybe I haven't memorised the whole instruction booklet, but I can't even force flash when I can't focus, which means I can only use flash when I can focus, but the problem is, I can't focus because it was too dark! And this happened on the Halloween Bash night. Looks like I have to read the instructions again. 

Other than that, it was great, at a great price!

Vocabulary:

stealthy -- (adj) of movement which is quiet and careful in order not to be seen or heard, or secret action
paedophile (US pedophile-- (n)[C] a person, especially a man, who is sexually interested in children
terrorist -- (n) [C] someone who uses violent action, or threats of violent action, for political purposes

Resources:
http://lockyep.blogspot.com/2010/06/website-digitalrev-camera-reviews.html

Olympus PEN E-PL1Official Website
http://www.olympus.com.hk/tc/pen/home.html

Olympus PEN E-PL1 on Wikipedia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olympus_PEN_E-PL1

Digitalrev Hands-on Review
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOVXlGVhqUQ

Full Review
http://www.imaging-resource.com/PRODS/EPL1/EPL1A.HTM

http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/stealth
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/paedophile
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/terrorist

Wednesday, 3 November 2010

Food: Bamboo Fungus

Image from Openrice

Ever since I have found out that this Brother 3 of Tam Boy Yunnan Rice Noodles is actually my student long time ago (found out from the first visit not long ago), I have visited his Mongkok branch 3 times. Not because I have discount (in fact, if I had known, I would definitely ask for one) and also not because he has found out that I know about his multi-million business, but there is really something attractive about the peppery spicy soup base that a spicy-food lover like me can't resist.

But today, I am not going to talk about the soup, because I have no pictures to show you, instead, I would like to talk about one mushroom that I have never found interests in but all of a sudden, fell in love with.

And that, is the Bamboo Fungus, or Phallus indusiatus, a member of the stinkhorn fungus. Why stinkhorn? Because the cap / top of the mushroom gives out a really stinky smell, so the male pickers really have to endure some smells before obtaining this lovely mushroom, as for female pickers, they might enjoy it (Why?). Why is it called bamboo fungus? Because they are grown "on agricultural wastes—bamboo-trash sawdust covered with a thin layer of non-sterilized soil"[1]

Image from Wikipedia

I think most of you have tried this mushroom before, but since I am new to this, I say I am attracted by its whiteness, crunchiness and health value, since the mushroom is "rich in protein, carbohydrates and dietary fiber"[1], "contains various bioactive compounds, and has antioxidant and antimicrobial properties."[1], and "The concentration of several mineral elements, including potassium, sodium, and iron was also favorable compared to fruits and vegetables"[1] As to how much goodness there are specifically, you will have to read up from the links I have below. For now, I know that if I want a vege-diet, I will definitely eat more bamboo fungus.



Homework:
Why do I say that the female pickers might enjoy the picking of this mushroom?

Vocabulary:
endure -- (vb) [T]  to suffer something difficult, unpleasant or painful

Resources:
http://www.openrice.com/english/restaurant/sr2.htm?shopid=21615

Bamboo Fungus
[1] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phallus_indusiatus

All That the Rain Promises and More: A Hip Pocket Guide to Western Mushrooms By David Arora
http://books.google.com/books?id=87ct90d4B9gC&lpg=PA241&dq=phallus%20hadriani&pg=PA241#v=onepage&q=phallus%20hadriani&f=false

http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/endure_1

Monday, 1 November 2010

Health and Fitness: Manage Your Weight

Image from hongkongsunday

Hello guys! Hope you all had a great Halloween! I had a good one, went to Ocean Park for their 10th anniversary and had some fun, but it wasn't all that scary. In fact, none of the actor/actress-ghost scared me even a little bit. Not even when they jumped out right from behind of in front of my face. That's mainly because I know they are fake in the first place, and second, I know they will come out from somewhere to scare me. And they were smart too, they targeted those who would give them reactions -- the girls, but even for girls, I don't think they found it scary this year. As such, I was mainly appreciating the designs of the haunted houses as I was pushed along by some unknown girls. They should watch my backpack, it's getting old and is no longer holding things that well.

Image from alwayshungryny.com

Anyway, I guess the most horrible thing I did last night was that I ate 2 Fillet O'Fish burgers for dinner. Didn't the Supersize Me and Supersize Me Add-Ons articles say that we shouldn't eat? Well, yes. But I had no quicker choice if I wanted to finish visiting all 8 haunted houses in 4.5 hours. So apart from those unhealthy chemicals I swallowed, what else did I get from the 2 fish sandwiches?

"Nutrition values of McDonalds Sandwiches" has the answer.

One Filet-O-Fish(R) contains: (15 sandwiches in comparsion, including those not for sale in Hong Kong)

Calories: 470 (9th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese
Calories from fat(g): 240kJ (7th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese
Total fat: 26 (7th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese
Saturated fat (g): 5 (10th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese
Cholesterol (mg): 50 (10th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese
Sodium (salt): 730 (14th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese
Carbohydrate (g): 45 (4th highest) -- highest in HK: Big Mac®
Fibre(g): 1 (14th highest) -- highest in HK: Big Mac® & McChicken®
Sugar(g): 5 (14th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese & Quarter Pounder® with Cheese
Protein(g): 15 (12th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese
% Daily Value of Vitamin A: 4 (11th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese
% Daily Value of Vitamin C: less than 2 (15th highest) -- highest in HK: Big N' Tasty®
% Daily Value of Calcium: 20 (15th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese
% Daily Value of Iron: 10 (15th highest) -- highest in HK: Double Quarter Pounder® with Cheese


Image from sports.cbsimg.net

From caloriecount.about.com, the healthiest McDonald's sandwich available in Hong Kong is the Hamburger, with the worst stuff at the lowest, the most evil burger? You should know by now.

Now, how many of you order this when you go to the McDonald's?

And because I had two, just double everything and you will get my intake. How many calories should I be taking in each day? According to Diet Blog, using the centimetre to foot & inch convertor, I need about 1646 calories per day, eating 2 Filet-O-Fish took up 57% of my daily calories intake -- which means, one meal = half day intake. That's a lot!

Watch your health!


Image from insidetheusa.net

PS: If you want to find the best eat in Hong Kong, you can take try the recommendation page from CNNGo.com instead.

Resources:
http://lockyep.blogspot.com/2010/10/movie-supersize-me.html
http://lockyep.blogspot.com/2010/10/health-and-fitness-supersize-me-add-ons.html

http://www.diet-blog.com/05/how_to_calculate_your_daily_calorie_needs.php
http://manuelsweb.com/ft_in_cm.htm

http://www.fatfreekitchen.com/junkfoods/mcdonald-nutrition-sandwiches.html
http://www.fatfreekitchen.com/junkfoods/mcdonald-nutrition-fries.html

http://www.cnngo.com/besteats

Wednesday, 27 October 2010

Health and Fitness: Supersize Me Add-ons

So you might have watched a video extra from the movie Supersize Me, a movie which I have recommended last week. Good! Have you tried the homework? Try it if you haven't. Answers will be released next Friday (5th November). How about a little more add on to this?



Once in awhile, I would like to have hamburgers too, and Burger King is my favourite choice, but I hardly ever order French fries/chips, just because they are too unhealthy (I guess you can tell from the movie), plus, they are expensive when ordered à la carte, and I don't like the sugary fizzy drinks. Why wouldn't mould grows on the chips? Would it be unhealthy to eat the chips that even the mould won't eat? Yes. Was it because there were just too much preservatives in the fries? Yes and no.

Here's an article that explains the reasons.

Moulding bread
Image from FlyBlackChick

Picking out the essence of the article above,

The truth is many processed foods don't decompose and won't be eaten by molds, insects or even rodents...Potato chips can last for decades...With meats, the primary reason why they don't decompose is their high sodium content. Salt is a great preservative, as early humans have known for thousands of years. McDonald's meat patties are absolutely loaded with sodium -- so much so that they qualify as "preserved" meat, not even counting the chemicals you might find in the meat...The real question in my mind is why don't the buns mold?

In short, chemicals and more chemicals.

Enriched flour (bleached wheat flour, malted barley flour, niacin, reduced iron, thiamin mononitrate, riboflavin, folic acid, enzymes), water, high fructose corn syrup, sugar, yeast, soybean oil and/or partially hydrogenated soybean oil, contains 2% or less of the following: salt, calcium sulfate, calcium carbonate, wheat gluten, ammonium sulfate, ammonium chloride, dough conditioners (sodium stearoyl lactylate, datem, ascorbic acid, azodicarbonamide, mono- and diglycerides, ethoxylated monoglycerides, monocalcium phosphate, enzymes, guar gum, calcium peroxide, soy flour), calcium propionate and sodium propionate (preservatives), soy lecithin.

I like the author's last few paragraphs the most,

chihiro: I'm hungry.
No face: Here you go.Just pick any mcBurgers you want.

No normal animal will perceive a McDonald's hamburger bun as food, and as it turns out, neither will bacteria or fungi. To their senses, it's just not edible stuff. That's why these bionic burger buns just won't decompose.


Which brings me to my final point about this whole laughable distraction: There is only one species on planet Earth that's stupid enough to think a McDonald's hamburger is food.


Opinions:
Sometimes, I will ask myself why more and more people are getting cancers. The most likely reasons in my opinions, the water, the food, the air and the home. Hang on, that is everything. Well, basically, yeah. You see, since the largest organ of our body is exposed to all these every single second, we are in fact in contact with a lot of chemicals.

Some people, particularly the doctors who see life and death day in and day out, consider there is nothing we can do, so we should just try to live a happy life. I think this is just semi-true.

If you know jumping down a building is dangerous, at least you should not stand too close to the edge. If you know the water is full of chemicals, shouldn't you at least get a water filter? How about staying away from chemical-packed food most of the time and only allow yourself to eat a little once in awhile? How about getting an air-filtering machine at home? (Though it is not eco-friendly) And how about using those eco-paints when you paint your apartment? Use less turpentine and smelly glue? Keep a few pieces of activated carbon at home to absorb the gaseous chemical?

Activated Carbon under microscope
Image from SMIAnalytical

Instead of waiting, I will always at least take some actions. Can't cover all of course, but at least I try to do what I can do (same as learning English). What about you?


Homework: 

  1. What is the largest organ of a human body?
  2. If 'soft drink' is 'fizzy drink' or 'soda', what is 'hard drink'? 
  3. What is the English word to describe a hard drink that is not sweet?


Vocabulary:
à la carte -- (adv) [before nounIf you eat à la carte, you choose each dish from a separate list instead of eating a fixed combination of dishes at a fixed price
fizzy drink -- (n) soft drink
decompose -- (vb)  [I or Tto decay, or to cause something to decay
rodent -- (n) [Cany of various small mammals with large sharp front teeth, such as mice and rats
preservative -- (n) [C] a chemical used to stop food from decaying
perceive -- (vb) [Tto come to an opinion about something, or have a belief about something
bionic -- (adj) humorous used to refer to a person who has greater powers of strength, speed etc. than seem to be possible for a human
distraction -- (n) [C] an activity that you do for pleasure


Resources:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mYyDXH1amic
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4wmac-INoXg
http://www.naturalnews.com/030074_Happy_Meal_decompose.html

http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/a-la-carte
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Soft_drink
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/decompose
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/rodent
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/preservative
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/perceive_1
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/bionic
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/distraction
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Turpentine
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Activated_carbon